Unuttered!

I walk speechless,

Together by your side,

In the morrow’s shelter,

Between the endless bridges,

And forlorn fate,

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Stealing thy gaze,

Seeking the laughter,

For it camouflaged,

The unuttered.

..and they say they met!

“Laughter is the only camouflage for an exalted love’s salvation and pain is the liberation of a condemned soul.”

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Palak. As pretty as her name and her smile. Weird, but not bad to me! I get scared of people, but she doesn’t scare me. I can talk, but I prefer listening when she talks coz she makes perfect sense to me. She can make me laugh, think and wonder at the same time. She is always a deep thinker, but expresses really less; probably she never wishes to! She thinks, writes and thinks. Want to know her? Impossible for many! Still, read her blog - A Soul Seeker's Contemplations...

20 people read and said:

Shriti said...

beautiful :)

The Enchantress said...

i love the way you dedicate things to someone....

beautiful expression of love and friendship...

hats off

Rahil said...

yaar had to refer dictionary for some words. but the meaning as in whole is so simple :)

liked it.

Sathish Chandrasekaran (சதீஷ் சந்திரசேகரன்) said...

True poem :)
well put across :)

Palak Vasant said...

@ Chocolate Lover: Thank You :) @ Nikita: Glad you liked it, thanks for appreciating my guest post :). @ Rahil: lol, that's good that u took pains 2 even refer the dictionary..Yes the meaning is utter simple but has lot of in between the lines thing, thank you :) and hoping to ur comment on my blog! @satish: Thank you!

Megha said...

lovely :)

S said...

@Nikita - I didn't dedicate it, she was worth it! :) Hope the into was not too scary?
Was it Palak? :p

Gazal Bharadwaj said...

I WALK BY YOUR SIDE...
The smile on your face lets me know that You need me.
There's a truth in your eyes saying You'll never leave me.
The touch of your hand says You'll catch me whenever i fall....
YOU SAY IT BEST WHEN YOU SAY NOTHING AT ALL.....

Samadrita said...

Lovely words. Beautiful emotions!

deepa kashyap said...

loved it :)

Rajlakshmi said...

its beautifulll... loved the way you have expressed ...
brilliant one

Pooja said...

really beautiful!!

Palak Vasant said...

Megha: Thank You, hey btw I read some stuff on ur blog...ur words have some great sense of depth... :)
Sourav: hehe...Am I supposed to say the truth?? :P
Gazal: Nothing at all....ahh my favorite track!! Thanks, glad my post got that reaction..hehe
Samadrita: Yes, thanks!
Deepa: Thank You :)
Rajlakshmi: Hey Thanks, yes, it is one of my most dearest pieces..
Pooja: Thank You :)

Meneka said...

Deep and beautiful words, equally beautiful introductions! :)

Ohh yes, Palak you are pretty!

Timeless Memories - My Bygone ! said...

Loved.. the mystic way u told things.. which make soo perfect sense...

Palak Vasant said...

Thanks Meneka.

Devil: P.S ur name makes me wonder how to address ya! Thanks, glad that u liked it :)

Ann said...

Beautiful Poem.. Lode reading it.. Thanks for sharing :)

Chaitanya said...

Beautifully written...

Palak Vasant said...

Ann: Thank You :)and yes, thanks to Sourav!

Chaitanya: Thanks :)

Alcina said...

A hint of old English gives it a royalty touch.

Dedication seems classy from you.They are not like other poems but highly thought and put in to writing kind.