There is something in the wake of your smile !

Listen, you..
Take a few deep breaths. Try hearing the pitter-patter of your heart beating in and feel your pulse racing. Let this silence of the world creep in you; see the anxiety take over you. Close your eyes and look at the black, keep looking look at the black until you see something worth holding onto inside of yourself. But, wait until breathing doesn't feel like a losing game and then open your eyes.
And listen !
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Look, you..
You are so beautiful, who reminds me of a lullaby in winter, sung like a secret not meant for anyone to know; but it's a shame, because you're one of the most pleasant songs!
Maybe you're fireworks that sparkle and light up the February sky - but unlike fireworks, you'll keep glowing just, forever. Or maybe you’re just you, and that’s more than enough! I know magic, exists.
And you're a proof !
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love_by_prettyfreaky_jeannie
Believe me, you..
I'd give you a rainbow if it erased the gray days; I'd give you a mirror if it made you see how much you deserved. I'd drain the oceans if it would erase your fear, and I'd pack hope and paint smiley faces on the trees if it'd make you smile. I'd send you a nightlight if it would do away with all the monsters and nightmares. I'd free fall with you just to be with you till the end. And at the end of the fall, we could lay on the ground and wish just to be wishing, hope just to be hoping, and at the end of it all, I'd offer you my hand to help you up.
And believe me you, believe you will !
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I believe you..
At times, I think of myself as an empty house, standing alone and hiding behind lies no one bothers to look past. locked windows and doors are meant to keep the world away, but hey! if I only had one key You’d have it.

And yes, you are my faith !
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28 people read and said:

Megha said...

god!! that was lovely totally luvey dubey!! like a romantic walk of a season :)
and yes happy birthday in li''ll advance!!

Nivedita Thadani said...

Hi Sourav
first thing is to wish(2hours in advance)
YOU A VERY VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY. HAVE A GREAT YEAR AHEAD. GOD BLESS..
Second is about this post..
still reading, and want to reread it before I really get the words... to post the comment here.

Rinaya said...

Felt like a dream...I would so love to hear these words spoken softly in my ears..
Indeed love is faith...beautiful lines.I'm waiting when your lady will finally have a name :)
Happy Hug Day.. & awaited Happy Kiss Day..may lady Luck kiss you & you get your the girl of your dreams!
P.S: b'day wishes will be delivered to you on time.. :P

Kay said...

oh my, so much to celebrate and be grateful for! Happy Birthday, Kiss Day and Valentines...

wonderful tribute, may everyday be Valentines Day :)

Sakhi. said...

I'd give you a rainbow if it erased the gray days; I'd give you a mirror if it made you see how much you deserved. I'd drain the oceans if it would erase your fear, and I'd pack hope and paint smiley faces on the trees if it'd make you smile. I'd send you a nightlight if it would do away with all the monsters and nightmares. I'd free fall with you just to be with you till the end............superbbb!!

Beyond Horizon said...

I read it twice...coz I did not understand it first time :)...You truly are "Hopeless Romantic"...and I am totally Hopeless in understanding love...thats the reason :p

on a serious note...I loved as you mentioned about Believe...Faith...the strength of a relation :)

Who said 13th is a dreadful date...when a person like you are born on this date who thinks more from his heart than brain...ITS A COMPLIMENT ;)

LOTS OF WISHES TO YOU ON YOUR BIRTHDAY...HAPPY BIRTHDAY...HAPPY VALENTINES DAY TO YOU TOO :)

vineet said...

was frustrated abit, nw bettr, wrked fr me....little jpys of lyf..ignored dese dayz

Raksha Bhat said...

Look,you...
Listen,you...
Believe me,you...
And believe me you,believe you will!;)
A beautiful person,you:)
Happy Birthday to you:)

SEPO said...

a very happy birthday! i sincerely hope and pray that you find your dream girl this year!

so that she can read all the great stuff you have written for her! :)

Alka Gurha said...

Oh...so now we know it. Happy birthday and may all ur romantic thoughts come true.Keep romanticising.lovely read as always.

Fatima said...

Heya Sourav wishing you a very Happy B'day! May all your dream come true and god bless you :)

You sure are a hopeless romantic...I never come across such a guy, on a lighter note...I guess its all coz in the Feb air ;)

About the write up it was beautiful !! I just wish life were really simple and the love of your life was by your side..

Take Care,
Fatima

Simran said...

WOW!!
It's Admirable!!
You are a true lover :)
Happy Birthday and valentine day too :)

Alcina said...

The words that speak so much without the heck of efforts..They pour out from the heart straight inside a heart.With a warm caress of an unknown hand..brushing lips of a stranger in dreams..overpowering glare of eye that mesmerizes..care such that it can never be nullified..trickle of sweet desire from eyes of happiness and love to bind and get bound forever..

Muaaah..happy kiss day :)
Lots of love..Happy birthday
And i wish there comes a teleporting machine soon for the much needed people like you :)

P.S.-To reign i wish i could forever in your love power drifted across the air,water,earth and all over.

Surabhi said...

Hey ! Read you blog for the first time and its really interesting.Very heartfelt post . Wish you a very happy birthday and super Valentine's Day.

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Beautiful writeup and beautiful promises... yet

Of late I have realized that I don't want it to change. Either way, good or bad, I won't be the change, I can only try, with my life energy, that is all.
I don't promise stars, I don't promise ocean and their pearls either, all I can offer is to walk alongside.
Believe in me, will you? I believe in you, for me, believe in yourself will you, for me?


This is what I'd say. No dead promises. :P

Happy Birthday Sourav.

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

Khushboo R. Gandhi said...

Hey 1st of all a very happiest of birthday :p n 2ndly tht ws 1 interestin n amazin post. Luved d way uv penned n presented it.

Nivedita Thadani said...

:)))))
Only a smile!!!
This post brings a sweet smile on every one's face. Let him/her be in love or not..
Beautiful imagination.

Tanvi said...

Ye Mr.Sourav listen.... this is good, anyways what else i can say?! :P

Nice one..by the way i already wished you before, ab ho gaya tera b'day...toh baas.. :P

Cheers,

anshy said...

I heard its your bday? i guess m late happpyy birthday! and as for the post...*sigh*clap clap its ur que to take a bow...amazin work!

Anonymous said...

in love with.....being in love? ;)

Timeless Memories - My Bygone ! said...

Wow.. all the celebrations at once.. Belated happy b'day dear and valentines day..
Yes its the time 2 belive in urself n stay happy..

Lilangel said...

That was a very beautiful post :) Looks like your bday was round the corner...Belated Happy Bday !! Cheers.

Shobana said...

Happy Birthday !!
Happy Valentines Day !!!
And....CONGRATS on winning the contest !!!
You really deserve..jus love every post of urs...keep writing...
Now that calls for a celebration !!

Tanishka said...

Belated happy b'day... :)
This is quite interesting and romantic... Feb effect I must say... :D

learnersreference com said...

cool expression...beautiful post

S said...

Thank you so much everyone for reading and liking. I've been keeping really busy with few things. Will reply individually to each comment soon and will come up with a post with the best reason to be busy! :D

Thanks a lot! :)

Nandita Prakash said...

thats shooooooooo shweeeeeeeeeeeeeeet :)

Unknown said...

Touched! The words, the expressions, the warmth.. splendid! Happy Birthday, belated! :)