Leave your burden
at the river's edge.
It is not welcome here.
Empty your pockets,
or if you have to, swim across naked.
at the river's edge.
It is not welcome here.
Empty your pockets,
or if you have to, swim across naked.
True, the sun may be gone for now;
yet the sky is far from empty.
The moon and stars
will light your way.
Open your eyes and let them.
A Happy New Year
for all whom have made mistakes
A new beginning..
for all whom have made mistakes
A new beginning..
25 people read and said:
What a BEAUTIFUL start of an awesome year ahead!
few words but immense power of inspiration...hope...faith ...dedication
KEEP EXPRESSING!!!
KEEP SMILING :)
happy new year!!
let life be as simple and beautiful as your poetry.
best wishes.
and someone said very rightly,
Blessed are the forgetful: for they get the better even of their blunders
I'll learn someday, but maybe, not today.
Happy New Year.
Blasphemous Aesthete
Wish you a very happy new too.
Hats off to you.... your poem brought a sense of contentment to my heart... god bless
Naina (The Pink Orchid)
very true indeed, a new beginning is what everyone needs, all make mistakes, its time to move on & live life the way we wanted to live always. i don't know these lines seemed to point in different directions, may be could have been centered on a central concept. reminded me of every amateur astronomers's aspiration or wish - to read in star light in pitch dark high altitude places like Ladakh or Himalayas, where the sky is lit up without pollution etc, that we can actually read in star light.
So true-even if the sun is gone, the sky is not empty.
Beautiful post Sourav-Yet again, I am amazed :)
P.S. But what about those who haven't made any mistakes? ;)
Your piece is an excellent and immense source of light..
Finding the best out of the things which are termed dark/bad..adjectives as these follow by a layman.
Happy new year :)
Inspiring indeed
@Poonam - What a beautiful comment to begin a fresh post of a fresh year. Thanks a lot, you too keep smiling! Take care :)
@Paulami - Happy New Year to you too! If only I can wish my life becomes what I write.
Regards.
@Anshul - Agreed, but habitual forgetfulness could b the enemy to motivation too.
We all learn everyday, don't we?
Happy New Year to you too.
@Nivedita - Thanks. Happy New Year to you and your family too! :)
@Naina - Good to hear from you after long. Thanks!
@Sunil - your comment adds a new dimension to the post. Haven't explored much about astronomy, but your comment makes pefect sense to me. Thanks, keep reading and enlighten me with ideas from oute...r space. Happy New Year to you :)
@Jaspreet - Thanks! You seem too amazed these days! :p
Agar life me mistake nai ki toh kya kiya? ;)
@Alcina - Thanks. Your and a post by Deepika inspired me to write this. Happy New Year to you too :)
@Sneha - Thanks!
hmm.. rightly said.. every beginning is some beginning's end.
sure we did mistakes and paid for them too... its time to move on and gather learnt lessons and also to apply them.. for a better future and less repented times..
happy new year
happy new year
Some mistakes are actually so sweet that I feel like repeating them.... every time I repeat every time I learn something deep, deeper on and on :) And finally I explore myself! ;)
Have a rocking 2011.
Cheers,
Very Beautiful! You are too good with words... :)
A Very Happy New Year ahead!
beautiful... absolutely beautiful...
A New Day,A New Beginning, A NEw Year....
Start on a clean slate and do not take guilt trips....wonderful thought.
First post of this year...double like:)
Happy new year SCP.. :)
Enjoy it every time I drop in here.. :)
Mention not..!!
Glad could be some inspiration..
... Learing from ur mistake u a better person - n never thought how true it is that the sky is never empty ... u r too good :)
Have a Great year !!
Lucky are those who never make mistakes and left the past behind...the rest can only hope to never repeat and hope for the better...
Every year is interesting, things happen least expected...
this year will be interesting if only in numbers....
1/1/11
1/11/11
11/11/11
Happy new year.... :)
Wow!
Very nice post...
Really our life is totally depends on our thinking ...
Nice blog u made.
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