Have I told you lately that, I love you... yes, I do.

I want to tell you that you are beautiful
But I don't merely want these words heard
I want them to be felt by you..


Because you should feel as beautiful as you are..

It's not just your eyes that make you beautiful..
(though they seem to always invite my awe-struck gaze)

And it's not just your hair..
(though the strokes of light in each strand illuminate everything around you)

And it's not just your smile..
(though it reminds me to enjoy life instead of focusing on the struggles it brings)


And it's not just your voice..
(which will always,
always sweep me away from my sorrows
and draw me closer to an unexplainable happiness)

Or even your hands..
(though they sing my tension to sleep when I get to hold them)

It's your heart...what I feel from mine is what makes you beautiful in my soul..
And you are so,
so beautiful...


Not only in my eyes, but in my life...

40 people read and said:

Alcina said...

Sweet and lovely :)

Dream for sure :)

Palwasha N. Minhas said...

ILOVELOVELOVE ETH!

SEPO said...

love it! so sweet and so very nice!

Anonymous said...

Sugary to the core!
Simple and of course... sweet!

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Love moves through my days, in mysterious ways.

Beautiful, love, and the loved.

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

Deepika said...

Ohhh.. You know how to send a girl on cloud nine. Man! If you said this to your girl she'll love you till the end. So sweet feel. Like a fairytale.. Do they exist? Whatever, wonderful.

S said...

@Alcina - Thanks. As good as one :)

@Palwasha - Thank you! Good to see you back :)

@Sepo - Thanks a lot!

S said...

@Ruhisonal - Sweet and simplicity makes it more sugary. Thanks!

@Anshul - Yes, indeed. Thanks.

@Deepika - Haha! That makes me go on cloud nine, does that mean you know how to send guys on cloud nine? :p
Thanks, I guess such feelings come naturally. They exist, to me at least, yes.

Vivek said...

lovely poem
written straight from inner core of heart, and connecting direct many hearts :-) .. a nice read.. after a while..
love is definetly in the air this season.

take care
have a great weekend

PULKIT said...

beautifully written. flawless :)

Beyond Horizon said...

BELLE !!!
You need to find out what that means...cause it took me sometime to say differently on this post... I read it within few minutes after you posted...but OH MY GOD...you can make people speechless too ;)
did not know what to say... Words in parenthesis are awesome as you explained... Repetition of words 'always' & 'so' made emotions more deep and true... Liked the lines about Smile... A Smile that makes one to live and enjoy Life...BELLE :)

Do I need to say anything more ;)
:)

Paulami said...

a bit said and a lot unsaid. when is that happening?

Meher said...

Nobody writes love poems the way you do. Sigh! Lucky is the girl who get's all this written for her =]

being alive said...

loved it loved it loved it!!
truly heartfelt!

S said...

@Vivek - Thanks. Glad it connects hearts, though it missed mine! ;)
Love is always in the air.

You too take care, and enjoy the weekend :)

@Pulkit - Thanks man!

@Poonam - Well she is!
I knew what that word meant contextually. Haha, sometimes speechlessness is what I have and what I get!
Rightly observed, always & so were used to emphasize and stress, glad it came out nice :)
Thanks, your comments make me smile, ohh I don't need to say that! :p

S said...

@Paulami - Unsaid is the way things remain with me; happening, no I don't think so.

@Meher - That was sweet. Thanks! Lets see if she knows it too..

@Being alive - Thanks Divya! :)

Anonymous said...

have i told you lately...
that i love yourrrr poem :D :D :D :D:

CutePriya said...

I just so loved it....'beautiful' is the word...*sigh*

Alcina said...

:P :P :P

Koi sudharne se raha..........

MENTION NOT..!! :-/

Sh@s said...

Have I told you lately that, you are a fabulous writer :)

Sakhi. said...

nice nice :D
nice posts on fb too!

Pooja said...

Breathtakingly beautiful! Just absolutely loved it!

Sonia said...

beautiful :)
simply beautiful :-)
can make anyone smile !!

Carol said...

Thanks, it felt great.

Tanvi said...

With the beautiful and indulging intensity you write... you can make anyone fall for that writer in you :)

Cheers,

S said...

@Megzone - :) Sweet. Thanks!

@CutePriya - Thank you Priyanka :)

@Alcina - Sudharne waale bewakoof hote hain! Thanks again! :p

S said...

@Shas - Thanks, that was a big compliment coming from you :)

@Sakhii - Thank you! :)

@Pooja - Really glad. Thanks :)

@Sonia - Glad it made you smile. Thanks ! :)

@Carol - Most welcome.

@Tanvi - That was nice, hope some does really soon! ;)
Thanks and cheers!

Mr. "Niraj" Lemon said...

a reallly sweet poem...

Ank said...

Lovely!! btw who's your Muse ;)

Alka said...

Evocative, emotional and straight from the heart...

Dr. Pratibha Singh said...

very beautifully written and expressed.

Maitreyee Bhattacharjee Chowdhury said...

Reading this poem was like witnessing a slow dance..the dance of the butterflies with the flowers..a creepy feeling that is the magic of poetry..its work like this that always keeps the faith in poetry alive..Thanks Sourav

revati kulkarni said...

truly amazing......got me completely mesmerized..... :)!!!!!!!!!

revati kulkarni said...

mind blowing and super awesum...........love to read your posts!!!! keep writing!!! :)

Unknown said...

true blue romantic at heart, i see. :)

Rek Sesh said...

Heartfelt, elegant in its simplicity...one doesn't always need the weight of heavy duty words to express the current mood/thought....liked it. :)

Delhizen said...

I love to make you smile, because every time you do,the glow on your face reflects on mine!

Okay, just tried something with the flow..didn't match up!

liked it, supper liked it. :)

Nandita Prakash said...

beautiful is the word buddy
so truly romantic
wow
super cool :)

anshy said...

y cant more guys be like u !

A grain of sand said...

after reading this and few of ur other posts,m glad i stumbled across your blog. good going!