Wish













I wish I was Peter Pan,
And I would never grow up.
Flying high above it all in the sky,
My only problem Captain Hook.

I wish I was Dr. Who,
And I could go back in time.
Go back and put things right,
Make it better in this hell of yours and mine.

I wish I was a professional actor,
And I got paid to act someone I’m not.
Get paid to fake who I am,
The real me would be forgot.

I wish I was a little kid,
Who could be held in their parent’s arms.
Gullible enough to believe that everything’s going to be alright,
Nothing’s of any harm.

I wish I could do magic
And it was as simple as waving my wand to put things right.
Instead it’s me fighting,
With all of my god-damned fight.

I wish I was a shooting star
And I came from a galaxy afar.
Then people could wish upon me and I could make their dreams come true.
A wish upon a star.

My wishes are small and few.
I wish my wishes get true!

36 people read and said:

HaRy!! said...

more like a kid written in a cute way!!! swell man!

deepa kashyap said...

hey so simple and sweet post i loved each wish !!
so cute pic :)
all the best for BAT :) :)

Rocksa said...

Sourav,

So simple and yet so complicated :) I don't know if I should wish you for the wishes to come true but what I can do though is wish you the best of everything what life has to offer :)

Finally an on-time comment for a change! Not commenting months after you write the post! ;)

And yes, how can I forget to WISH you luck with BAT 12? So, good luck :)

Keep smiling and keep wishing! Never know when life will utter 'granted' :)

geeta said...

Sweet innocent wishes..straight from the heart....

loved reading it..

All the best for BAT !!


Geeta

Anonymous said...

"i wish i was a little kid,
who could be held in their parent’s arms.
gullible enough to believe that everything’s going to be alright,
nothing’s of any harm" so wonderfully written sourav!!
we all wish our wishes get true!!!
amen to all ur wishes.. :)
this was good for sure :)
very thoughtful, liked the second last para a lot!

YAM said...

really nice:0

Saad Shaikh said...

Bas itna sa khwaab hai.. :P

Good one.

Think before you wish, for it might just come true. ;)

Best of Luck! :)

Rumya said...

Wow Sourav!!
Loved your little poem!! :)
It really doesn't matter if it is child-like or like a man, simple or complicated.
Anyone can wish a wish and when it comes straight from the heart, its the best wish!! :D
Very neatly written!!
I enjoyed every stanza throughly!!

Anonymous said...

Thast really a sweet poem :) Well , do you have another wish-list with you , just in case all wishes come true ? :P Wish you best of luck for BAT 12 :)

Anonymous said...

Beeeeeeeeeeautiful SCP.. You have a vote.. :)

Gauri said...

very innocent and cute post.

:)

Good Wishes for BAT12!

Gkam - Wish

UB said...

Wow such a cute poem. Enjoyed every stanza :)

Sopalakish said...

awww cutee! :)

Jaspreet said...

This is something that is well thought out yet is presented so simply!!..liked it a lot.

CutePriya said...

so...so...so..irresistibly CUTE...may all your wishes comes true...

(i wanna eat that cutie-pie in d pic)

and do keep penning such wonderful write-ups ^_*

Love,
Priya

Viyoma said...

So so so sweet :))))

Someone is Special said...

Hmmm what a wish... Nice poem, good thoughts. I am loving it..

I wish you a good luck for BATOM - 12

Saravana Kumar - Wish

Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M

Amity said...

hmmm...sweet and cute...:-)

i wrote also a poem similar to this but have not posted yet...:-)

soon in august...i will post it, titled..."I wish...."

check my rendition, too...:-)

and all the best for BAT 12!!!

Vinay Sharma said...

liked it .. sweet yet subtle ! .. straight from the heart

Sathish Chandrasekaran (சதீஷ் சந்திரசேகரன்) said...

Kiddish wishes bot really a sweet read :)

The Enchantress said...

hie sourav,

you are back after a long time...

thathastu....may all your wishes come true...

Brijender Singh said...

Sweet and simple-the innocence of your thoughts add an incomparable charm to your post.
ATB for BATOM

Divaa Divine said...

i love cute :d and this is cute

Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) said...

sweet poem Sourav...

loved this para the most...

I wish I was a little kid,
Who could be held in their parent’s arms.
Gullible enough to believe that everything’s going to be alright,
Nothing’s of any harm.


Cheers!
Tavish

Deepika said...

aawww..... choo cute!! seriously! n completely agree with Tavish's comment..loved that paragraph the most!! :)

Vipul Grover said...

Hey buddy, nice cute poem with nice cute wishes.. ATB for BAT :)

Anonymous said...

Wonderful poem.. very sweet, too..

Loved it, Saurav Bhai :)

Vivek said...

Hi Sourav ,
How are you ? Hope you are having a great time..

Nice Poem ...Loved the Child within, coming out to explore its unexplored potential.

nice read.

take care

wanderer said...

Pretty sweet...feels like a child musing all by itself.

regards,
wanderer

Anonymous said...

how sweet! :)

Vishal Raj said...

Adorable. :)

Simran said...

Such cute wishes and cute the way you expressed :)

The Enchantress said...

I wish I was a professional actor,
And I got paid to act someone I’m not.
Get paid to fake who I am,
The real me would be forgot.

Beautiful lines...depicting you are a beautiful soul...

Surbhi Jain said...

My wishes are small and few.
I wish my wishes get true!

haha... such a sweet poem came straight from the child within you. Loved the innocence.

Yous wishes will surely come true :)

Unknown said...

Hey Sourav one of your different but seriously very nice post..

i wish ur wish come true.. as i m sure tht 90 people out of 100 muts be having same wish . even me too..

thanks for taking it out with your post.. which is their in everyones heart..:).I wish i cud hv done d same..:) :P

Nivedita Thadani said...

Cute poem, Its like my daughter's wishes:
The day she has a doctor visit, that whole week she wants to become doctor, and plays with her doctor set,
The day I take her to parlor, the whole week she plays Beautician role and do my eyebrows with the big rope:-)
When she comes to my school and sees other children wishing me and listening to me, she wants to be a teacher, and that week I am her student..
When I take her to the vegetable market, she plays that...

Her list goes on like that...(you will be bored if I write down all the things...)
Wishes are good, if they do something good to you and others.
Reading your wishes, I really wish that your wishes should come true..
All the best.