I don't think I've ever been so lost before
If I've said it once, I've screamed it more
But what was it for?
And I can hear their voices knocking at my door
Thinking of telling me what to do and where to go
And it shows
'Cause in my mind logic has been replaced
With a blindfolded version of real faith
If I've said it once, I've screamed it more
But what was it for?
And I can hear their voices knocking at my door
Thinking of telling me what to do and where to go
And it shows
'Cause in my mind logic has been replaced
With a blindfolded version of real faith
I don't know how much longer I can hold on
When years are short, but heartache is long.
All the memories past, will surely last
But the moment is gone
How strong do you think I am?
When years are short, but heartache is long.
All the memories past, will surely last
But the moment is gone
How strong do you think I am?
I put my trust in something I couldn't see
And even though I can't feel
Somehow I still b.e.l.i.e.v.e !
And even though I can't feel
Somehow I still b.e.l.i.e.v.e !
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Wowww yaar.. This is real beautiful.. ATB.. :)
saurav came here after a long time ya..and realised what i had been missing at :) awesome stuff as always
Sourav,
I am speechles....such wonderful display of words...loved the pic...and blind faith...beautifulll...
Saurav , beautiful poem !! The line - 'When years are short, but heartache is long'is awesome , and so very true ! Lovely poem , I liked it more , as it ends with a dilemma , hoping against the faltering faith !
Man, I must say yu really rant well in yur dream... :)... topic and yur phrases match v well mate...!
hey nicely composed...
I put my trust in something I couldn't see
And even though I can't feel
Somehow I still b.e.l.i.e.v.e.
Nice!
Beautiful!
believe in Love.
Have faith.
But make sure You're not in love with a mask...
Let Love survive. Let faith prevail.
Let the mask be shed...
Deep... thought-provoking...
beautiful poem
nice creation :)
short and beautiful!
to me this ur best post so far.
all the best
may u win :)
Great read!
and... that's how u live :)
Nicely written.
Ur poem surely had me hooked from the beginning :)
nice work man ...
keep blogging
cheers !!!
Loved it :)
creative..
Keep believing and keep penning :)
Nicely composed poem, well written. You are an amazing talent..
I wish you all the best for the contest, SSC - II
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it is simply beautiful
I am impressed. Its very well written. The pic compliments the work perfectly.
wonderful play of words, very aptly suiting the pic, well done...
best of luck for ssc and do check out my post too
very well done, good wordplay and suiting the pic aptly..
best of luck for ssc and do check out my post too
nice lines... the deep thought pouring out,,,....
ATB
Extremely thoughtful.
My God! I was touched. excellent use of words to portray .
Blind folded faith!
I wrote a post once on my blog too..
"if there is something that you really need, the whole world will conspire to get it to you" -
And I say as a reply to that,
and for that thing to reach you, you need to atleast stick to the world, and be in it. and for that all you need is faith and hope and to believe in the world!
Lovely , lovely
Un petit coucou de France!
AmitiƩs:CLAIRE
Hi.. Nice post.. :)
Well i m kinda new to blogging world, so exploring blogs .
Following u, hope thats ok :)
wow!
beautiful :)
Thank you everyone!
Love,
Sourav.
The title defined beautifully in the whole post..Sometimes its good just to believe.
Thinking gives out pros and cons and then the decision is either yes or no but blind faith is always a yes :)
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