Have you lost your sanity?
Yes, I think I have.
Are you really hurt?
No...and yes.
She really left you...
Please, not now.
ALWAYS! 'til you realize.
Realize what? That I'm a loser?
No, that you're feeling a heartbreak.
No, I am feeling an heart-ache.
You feel for her, right?
I feel… for her, no!
Don't lie to me.
What are you going to do, huh?
Anything to help you.
Then quit asking all these questions!
Sorry, no can do.
Why?!
You know why.
Tell me!!
Because you're not expressing.
Do you want me to?
Yes, you loser..
Continue..
You still in love with that girl!
Yes, the one I am talking to, now
What?
What, what!
I Love You!
Shut up and hug me!
33 people read and said:
nice :)
loved it :)
srslyyyyyyyy awesum sirji :)
rona aa gaya :(
ahhaaa kiys izhaarrr... kiya ikraar :)
lovely write :)
woww!!! serioulsy, how do u do it everytime??? loved it ...
Thank you Neha! Happy to see you here, after really long! :)
@Sweta - I knew you'd love it! Khushi ke aansu? :p
@Rajlakshmi - You have a really long name! :| Waah kya comment! Thanks.
@P - Things happen, and I do it! Thank you! :)
lovely!!! i felt lyk.. mummmmmyyy.. :'(
awwwwh....
so chweeeeet !!!!
@Pria - Thank you! Really happy my words can go someone so emotional! :)
@Nikita - Thanks!
Sweet . Loved it :)
Real :)
awefffome!!! :)
omg!! i loved it Sourav!! absolutely Superb :)
@Ekam - Thank you! :)
I don't know, if it is!
@Deeps - Fank you! :D
@Ank - Is it? You are always too sweet. Thanks! :)
ha!! not always only wid sm special ones ;) :P
btw who inspired u fo this rite up :)
@Ank - He must be really lucky! :)
Inspired, no, no one .. why do you think so? :p
Ahh Loved it..!! simply superb..
Like the way it unfolded, bro. :)
thats sweet...:)
:) naah re remembered something someone hehehhee
me copying and pasting ur post on my BLOG :d:P
seems a whole love story is written in just few words !!
liked it ohh nooo just loved it ;) <3 <3
Superb :)
really loved the way it ended :)
@Devil - Thank you! :)
@Sadho - Glad you liked it, thanks man! :)
@Niraj - I know, thanks! :)
@Sweta - Kisko remember karliya? ;)
Do you even care to take my permission? :p Thanks! :)
@Deepa - Sometimes, the deepest of stories are expressed in fewest words .. Thank you Deepa! :)
@Sathish - Thanks a lot dude! :)
awwww.. dis is so sooo cute <3
i wish i cud see the reaction of the girl!! short and sweet :) loved it.. write a story wid me ^^
Arre yeh kaun chura legaya tumko :'( :P
Naice naice.. ;)
@Hafsah - Is it! :p
Yeah, the girl must have cried and cried some more! Anytime with you! :)
@Bedlam - Aise thode na koi le jayega! :p Thanks, thanks! :)
truly awesum....nvr thought d end wud b so lovely :)
I was somewhere deep down, expecting the last part ;)
Simply beautiful, expressed really well.
That's so beautiful!
Liked the end :)
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@Beyond Horizon - Not all ends are bad. Thanks :)
@Rahil - I know you must be! Thank you ! :)
@Jaspreet - Well! I am really happy to see you back! And the fact that my post made you smile adds a feather to my cap! :D
This was really interesting and sweet.
Oh so questioning..(kidding) :P
A very different form of writing that i witnessed just now.And after reading it i feel like the bud of the red rose has just emerged :)
charismatic!!
Awe...that was absolutely adorable and sweet :)
Take Care.
brillent...outstanding..............
i loved it.....!!
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